This is an editing for the reveiew in chapter 2. I will attach an example of what Dr. Akerman sent and how NCU would like the peer review in chapter 2. I also noticed in the summary the use of the word mence. I do not think this is a good idea at this level (new word please). Note in the Limitations section, We should not be doing a face to face because of COVID 19? Pleas rethink this. Question are we staying in line with the approved chapter one. We seem to be straying for what was approved. Please check the alignment through out the research. Please note stament problem alignment or miss alignment. Lets work togeather and get out of this chapter (2 and 3). We are almost done. Hold fast. This is some very good research and some one will be able to continue and solve real world problems. Thank you so much.